The last table
Poem by Sudar Senthil
The Last Table
The last table
was not stable
because of the cable
attached to the label
on top of the table
that is not able
to be stable.
For the girl
sitting on the table
reading an Aesop fable
who couldn’t keep stable
because of the table.
Oh, what an evil cable!
The last table
was not stable
because of the cable
attached to the label
on top of the table
that is not able
to be stable.
Down fell the poor girl
reading a fable
tied a label
attached to a cable
because of the
unstable table.
The last table
was not stable
because of the cable
attached to the label
on top of the table
that is not able
to be stable.
Super Sudar
ReplyDeleteSuper Sudar
ReplyDeleteGuru Samy: Its like to read EX CM Mr. Anndurai's Kavithai. SS(superb sudar). Is she writing of her own or with any guidance?
ReplyDeleteViji Balaji: Super sudar:-)
ReplyDeleteGood one.. but a small suggestion.. The style of writing poem remembers how tamil poems are written.. probably that can change.. otherwise good one..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comments ATJ! This is an 8 year old child getting her feet wet on poetry. I will let her write as she wishes for now - do not want to interrupt her thought flow. Surely pass on this comment a little later.
ReplyDeleteKalyani Govindaraju:
ReplyDeleteOMG she's so.... Good with brilliant thinking!!!!
August 20 at 10:29pm